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Seat in the Window"Ah, there you are."
I turned my head at the voice.  Margaret was stood in the doorway of the small, grey room, looking at me expectantly.  She was a dear old thing, Margaret – a portly, cuddly woman with a ruddy face and a shock of white hair: the very epitome of a little old lady.
She walked over and sat near me.  I'd recently taken to sitting quietly in a seat by the window, staring out into the street outside.  Gone were the days that I would excitedly jostle around the house and attend to the garden.  Now I'd simply keep myself to myself, though it was nice to have her look after me on some of the colder nights.
"I brought you yo
CMC CSI, part four and a halfDisclaimer: this chapter adds absolutely nothing to the Cutie Mark Crusaders' investigation; in fact, it is made from material half excised from that story, hence "part four and a half" instead of "part five".  Readers with little familiarity of my other works are asked to wait patiently until part five, or check out the description for a list of what you should read first!

"Oh, there you are, Big Macintosh!"
"Eeyup," the stallion said, taking off his collar and hanging it on a hook on the wall.
Apple Bloom and her three friends stood to attention, as though caught in the middle of some scheme.  Behind them, Granny Smith dreamily rocked ba

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I made this because I am the craziest nerd!

I've tried to listen to all the feedback (there is LOADS OF IT) and here is a more coherent version!

As before, down means forward through time. Links between bubbles mean that they can be manipulated around each other, to an extent, like free-floating ice floes.

Again, tell me if you think I'm wrong. Well, don't do that. Tell me how to improve it.
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~CrazyGirlEspeon May 6, 2013  New member
Why did I read it all...
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~q97randomguy Dec 5, 2012
I like this... I like this a lot!
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~mariusioannesp Nov 17, 2012
You've obviously put alot of thought into this. Maybe too much. Just one thing though. At least in the United States from what I know, a talent show doesn't necessariy have to take place at the end of the school year. So The Show Stoppers could conceivably take place as far back as around after The Cutie Mark Chronicles and the reasoning that they got the clubhouse to prepare for summer still kind of stands. But as Fluttershy says "But,... you know..., whatever you want to do is fine. "
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Mood: Love ~Meatabex Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That's a crazy timeline. BUT IT'S SO GUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUDDDD
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Mood: Joy ~Cyclone-Dusk Aug 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Can't wait to see you integrate S2! :D I wonder if some of the second season's events might even fit within the first season's chronology! Maybe the entire span of MLP:FIM is *actually* taking place in less than two entire years thus far! O_O
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~rosutu Jul 28, 2012
This all seems to be rather coherent and cohesive. Bonus points towards keeping everything about the seasons and such in mind.

Would you try to tackle Season 2, too?
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~cutemute34 Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Are you gonna include the events of Season 2? Plus, even if they can't officially make story arcs for the most part, sometimes I wonder if the team even has a timeline of sorts where they're planning things out; this could be a useful asset. Or maybe I'm being presumptuous on your behalf. I dunno.
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~Rarity-pie May 24, 2012
This is true i agree exept i think swap around Owl's well that ends well and The show stoppers...
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~Norcon72 May 21, 2012
Hmm... head canon excepted
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~Mosflow May 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I think for the heck of it i might rearange the episodes on my computer and watch the season agian and see if it feels more in order.
Yes another reason to watch the episodes agian. woot
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