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Seat in the Window "Ah, there you are."
I turned my head at the voice.  Margaret was stood in the doorway of the small, grey room, looking at me expectantly.  She was a dear old thing, Margaret – a portly, cuddly woman with a ruddy face and a shock of white hair: the very epitome of a little old lady.
She walked over and sat near me.  I'd recently taken to sitting quietly in a seat by the window, staring out into the street outside.  Gone were the days that I would excitedly jostle around the house and attend to the garden.  Now I'd simply keep myself to myself, though it was nice to have her look after me on some of the colder nights.
"I brought you yo
CMC CSI, part four and a half Disclaimer: this chapter adds absolutely nothing to the Cutie Mark Crusaders' investigation; in fact, it is made from material half excised from that story, hence "part four and a half" instead of "part five".  Readers with little familiarity of my other works are asked to wait patiently until part five, or check out the description for a list of what you should read first!

"Oh, there you are, Big Macintosh!"
"Eeyup," the stallion said, taking off his collar and hanging it on a hook on the wall.
Apple Bloom and her three friends stood to attention, as though caught in the middle of some scheme.  Behind them, Granny Smith dreamily rocked ba

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I made this because I am the craziest nerd!

I've tried to listen to all the feedback (there is LOADS OF IT) and here is a more coherent version!

As before, down means forward through time. Links between bubbles mean that they can be manipulated around each other, to an extent, like free-floating ice floes.

Again, tell me if you think I'm wrong. Well, don't do that. Tell me how to improve it.
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~Rarity-pie 2 days ago
This is true i agree exept i think swap around Owl's well that ends well and The show stoppers...

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~Norcon72 4 days ago
Hmm... head canon excepted

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God is good. Christ is love.

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Fixing what cannon f*cked up!

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Silver x Blaze group :)
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~Mosflow May 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I think for the heck of it i might rearange the episodes on my computer and watch the season agian and see if it feels more in order.
Yes another reason to watch the episodes agian. woot

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:damphyr:... can understand nothing.:damphyr:
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~Pirill-Poveniy May 10, 2012
This is quite well thought out, it would be nice to see something like this done for season two.

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~EmperorJewel May 7, 2012
With Season 2 over, think you will do one for it as well?
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~Devilot109 Mar 6, 2012
My comment appears to not be on here? @.@
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~Devilot109 Mar 4, 2012
You also have to factor in that in "Stare Master" Apple Bloom's "help" was more a hindrance. Show Stoppers shows that Sweetie Belle is hopeless at any sort of crafts project (she didn't know how to use dressing dummies, and her sets looked like random bits of wood and cardboard colored on with crayon), and Scootaloo openly admits that she didn't even realize they were trying to make a table.
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~garciarael Jan 6, 2012
How are you sure that Bon Bon wasn't just being a jerkass? After all, Ponyville isn't that big and the Carousel Botique isn't exactly obscure or anything.

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~JoshGalen Dec 1, 2011
I was planning on doing one of these, but I know it wouldn't have been anywhere near as good as this. Are you planning on doing this with Season 2 once it's over?
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!MLPFIMlover234 Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
woa

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